The God's Statue *MC*
The Gods StatueHe leans exquisitely, his hand pressed on the hard, weather-roughened plinth.His dancers body weightless,but eternally anchored to the rock.I search for meaning in him, strugglingwith...
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Ah Davie, this was beautiful, like a walk in the park! So many aspects of life in these words...so many visions come to mind. Lovely details.
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what we were & what we become, and what we can be....for just a momenta touching write Davi, I applause in awebrilliant!Sammie Poets Passing Place
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Thank you Raven, and Sammie. I did indeed have in mind a walk in a park, where there is a statue of a classical god. The contrasts and the implications struck me very forcibly.
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Love this Davie! the contrasts between perfect but sterile depiction in stone, and vibrant life, with all its failings and faults is beautifully drawn. (BTW, which god was it?: for some reason, I keep...
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Everything comes to life through your words, even the stone silent statue beneath the planets and moon.. Dan
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davi ........ the perfection of "god" is yet to be seen, since the chisled flakes of marble displaced, still remains that of another world .... as seen through the eyes of what you have written ........
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Valoe, Dan and Prophet - thank you very much for your comments. Valoe - yes, I think it was Apollo, but I'm no longer quite sure! A fleeting glimpse in a park some time ago. Odd how sudden, unexpected...
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oh, davie ... this is wonderful!! vivid and compelling in both imagery and thought ... perhaps perfection's not all it's cracked up to be, eh? the contrasts drawn are beautifully crafted. truly, this...
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Hey Davie. This works for me on several levels. A fine piece of introspective thought. Enjoyed.Yours, DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "How Bright Her Beauty Shines" or visit me at The Dark...
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Beth - many thanks for your award! unexpected, but very much appreciated. And you're right - I gave up on Perfection many years ago!! Dark - Im glad it works for you. Thank you for your comment.Davie
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David:your writes are always thoughtfuland deep with a keen and caring insight.sometimes i think i hear some new chordin a writer's work & am never sure whetherit is really new, or whether i am...
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Neil, That's a tremendous comment, and I can only say that I hope your assessment is true! You are such a generous commentator, and your remarks are always highly valued.
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Some people crave the perfection depicted in stone, but give me the realness of those in the park anyday... I loved the image of the old man holding himself erect at the sight of a pretty girl......
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